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First Blood First Serve chapter 14 PostThu Feb 06, 2014 10:44 am Offline
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{Return from Commercial break.}

{Conner and Benjamin take cover behind Mackey's car as he fires at them.}

{Mackey fires a shot rendering the gun empty.}

Conner: "He's out!"

{Conner steps out from behind hiding and sprays the windows of the school with glass causing Mr Mackey to drop his magazine and dive for cover.}

{Conner primes a grenade and rolls it under the cars gas tank.}

Conner: "Move!"

{The two brothers run out from cover as Mr Mackey's get's Conner in his sights}

Mackey:"Your mine M'kay"

{The grenade explodes flipping Mackey's car on it's roof and igniting the gas tank. the explosion causes Mackey to duck for cover as Conner and Benjamin shoot open the front doors to the school}

Benjamin: "Split up and search the ground floor sweep and clear".


{Conner and Benjamin split up shooting out the hall lights to hide their position and shooting down the door to Principal Victoria's office.}


Principal Victoria: {Hysterically} "Conner please don't shoot!!"

{Conner lowers his M249}

Conner: "Come on Ben He's obviously not here."

Benjamin: "What about these two?"

Conner: "They're just small fish we want the big fish."

Dr Adams: {Hysterical} "Oh my god oh my god He's more out of control than Jerry Sandusky in a Penn State locker room!"
{Dr Adams breaks down sobbing.}


{Conner facepalms and groans before moving on leaving Principal Victoria and Dr Adams unharmed}

Conner:" Let's just go."

Dr Adams: "Thank God thank God We're still alive" {He starts laughing with relief}

{The two brothers sweep and clear the ground floor searching for Mr Mackey.}

Cafeteria

{Conner shoots up the soda machine causing it to spit out exploded soda cans.}

Benjamin: "I had 75c on me if you wanted a soda."

Conner: "You gotta kill e'm before you drink e'm."

{He drinks sprite from an exploded can}

Conner: "Tastes better freshly killed".


Classroom

{Conner and Benjamin break down the door to find Mr Garrison staying late pleasuring himself to 50 shades of grey}

Garrison: "Oh Yeah that's Hot."

Conner and Benjamin: AHHH GOD {Benjamin covers Conner's eyes.} Sick!"

Garrison: "AHH OH MY GOD PLEASE JUST DO WHATEVER YOU WANT TO ME HAVE YOUR SICK WAY WITH ME BUT DON"T SHOOT!!!!"

Conner: "Don't ask?

Benjamin: "Don't tell!

{They both leave}

Garrison: "Hey where are you going?"

Conner: "That's guys got some issues"

Benjamin: "Tell me about it."

{Garrison looks arounds suspiciously to make sure no one's watch and slowly picks up his book and starts masturbating again.}

{Meanwhile The parents and the police pull up to the school and get out.}

Sharon: "OH MY GOD!!!!"

Yates: "Alright everybody get back! Murphy I want a full perimeter around the school nobody goes in or out!

Murphy: "Yes Sir."

{The police quickly surround the school and SWAT gets prepared to go in. while parents look on at the damage Conner has inflicted the sound of gunfire echoes through the shattered windows causing everyone to duck for cover.}

Gerald: "Forget about it this is Suicide"

Kyle: "We can't Dad He's our friend."

Sheila: {Mumbles incoherently from the effects of the tranquilizer.}

Gerald: "Your Mother's right Kyle it's too dangerous."

{Sheila starts drooling in front seat.}

Kyle: "But Dad."

Gerald: "No buts Kyle your staying right here."

Stan: "Sergeant Halfcock say something?"

Halfcock: "Your father's right Stan you stay right here this is something Conner and I have to do alone."

{He starts walking towards the school.}

Yates: "Where do you think your doing Sergeant?"

Halfcock: "My job."

Yates: "Listen to me this is my job my hostage situation I'm in charge here."

Halfcock: "Yates look at that bus LOOK AT IT!!! If you send your men in there then we're gonna have a bloodbath on our hands. I'm just asking for one chance to talk some sense into him. The only one at risk would be me."

Yates: "You had your chance Hemlock and you blew it."

Halfcock: "LISTEN TO ME SGT THAT BOY IN THERE IS MINE I TRAINED I KNOW HE THINKS AND I'M THE ONLY ONE HE TRUSTS!! NOW ALL I'M ASKING FOR IS ONE CHANCE ONE CHANCE TO TALK HIM DOWN!!!"

{Mysterion appears on the the hood of the police car.}

Yates: "Mysterion boy are we glad to see you."

?:"Sergeant Yates listen to me We have someone who can reason with Conner."

Yates: "Who is it Mysterion?"

{The bright light appears again.}

Light: "Sergeant call your men back I can handle Conner.}



Yates: "And you are?"

Voice: "The only chance you got of ending this peacefully."

Yates: "Alright Mysterion we'll take your word on it." *turns to the policemen* "Let them through."

Halfcock: "Thank You!"

{Sgt Halfcock Mysterion and the mysterious light. starts running towards the school with Mysterion fading the screen to black with his cape.}

{Cuts to Conner and Benjamin breaking into the school library they begin shooting out the overhead lights to cover their movements}

{ On the rooftop Mr Mackey reloads his rifle and sees Conner through the sky light over the library unknowing casting a shadow into the darkened room which catches Conner's eye.}

{Thinking Quickly the Young Marine dashes under the skylight to draw Mackey's fire, Mackey not knowing Conner's plan opens fire through the skylight giving his position away. Conner responds with a burst of gunfire hitting Mackey several times and sending the school counselor through the skylight.}

{Conner and Benjamin close in for the kill.}

Mackey: {coughs} "go ahead"{cough} go ahead GO AHEAD YOU CRAZY SON OF A BITCH FINISH ME OFF M'KAY!!!

Halfcock: CONNER!!!! CONNER DON"T DO IT"

{Conner turns around to see Sergeant Halfcock standing in front of him. The Wailing of Police sirens and the flashing lights light up the school.}

Halfcock: "Listen to me Conner You have no chance drop your weapon I'm gonna get you out of here."

{Conner pays no attention and instead picks up Mr Mackey's rifle.}

Halfcock: "Think about what your doing Conner. "The Building perimeter is surrounded, no exits, There are 200 police officers and guardsmen out there and a lot of M16s. You've had your little private war but it's over do you understand me it's over Conner!!"

{Conner simply looks over at Benjamin and then at Halfcock and walks away from him.}

Halfcock: "It's over!!"

Conner:"NOTHING IS OVER NOTHING YOU CAN'T JUST TURN IT OFF LIKE IT NEVER HAPPENED!!!! I DIDN'T WANT THIS KIND OF LIFE BUT I DIDN'T HAVE A HOME TO GO BACK TO!!

Halfcock: "The Pandemic was hard time for a lot of people Conner but that's all in the past now the best thing we can do is put it behind us."

Conner: "THAT'S EASY FOR YOU TO SAY THIS IS ALL BENJAMIN AND I HAVE LEFT DRIFTING FROM TOWN TO TOWN LIKE VAGRANTS. IN THE CORPS WE HAD A CODE OF HONOR NEVER EVER LEAVE A MAN BEHIND WHERE WERE THEY WHEN WE NEEDED THEM????

{He angrily tosses the M249 across the room and breaks down against a bookshelf}

Halfcock: "Conner listen to me {He crouches next to him} LISTEN TO ME LOOK AT MY EYES LOOK AT MY EYES!!!! your brother is dead do you hear me he's dead. He's been dead for almost a year."

{Conner looks over to the corner where Benjamin is just standing there not saying anything.}

Conner: "HE'S NOT DEAD HE'S BEEN WITH ME RIGHT NOW! SAY SOMETHING TO HIM BENJAMIN TELL HIM YOUR NOT DEAD!!"

{In Actuality Benjamin is not there and has never been there Conner is actually yelling at an empty corner.}

{Conner finally breaks down in outright sobbing}

Conner: "SAY SOMETHING BENJAMIN ANYTHING! WHY WON'T YOU SAY ANYTHING?" {He takes several deep breaths through his tears} "FOR GOD'S SAKE BENJAMIN WHY WON'T YOU SAY SOMETHING TO HIM?"

{Suddenly a voice calls out to him."}

Voice: "Because that's not your brother."

Conner: "Who said that?"

{ Mysterion darts across the room startling Conner who opens fire destroying several shelfs in the process.}

Conner: "Get back here!"

Halfcock: "Conner!"

{Conner chases the hero across the library spraying bullets with abandon finally cornering him in a dead end}

Conner: "There's nowhere left for you to hide."

{He empties the remainder of his belt into the dead end only to see a green question mark spray painted on the wall.}

Conner: "Where are you?"

?: "Here "

{Conner turns around and is struck by a blow from Mysterion but he quickly recovers and counters the hero''s next punch redirecting away from him and sweeping his knee. Conner moves in for the kill with his knife}

Conner: "Your a good warrior but you have what it takes to take that extra step!"

{Conner prepares to kill him but Mysterion stuns him with his cape and twists his wrist causing Conner to drop the knife. The two engage in a bare knuckle hand to fight for 90 seconds which ends ultimately with Conner overpowers Mysterion by exploiting his injured knee and wrestling him to the ground.}

?: "Listen to me Conner That's not your brother,"

Conner: *eyes full of rage.* "Your lying No one is going to take him away from me!"

{Suddenly the bright aura returns}

Aura: " He's telling the truth Conner"

{We cut to a shot of a figure emerging from a bright aura a young man about 19/20 in full Marine dress uniform followed by the boys and their parents."

Conner: "B-Benjamin?"

{Conner can't believe what he's seeing as the Benjamin in the corner fades away.}

{Conner runs up to his brother and tearfully hugs his leg, Benjamin steps down to one knee and hugs him back.}

Conner: "I remember now."

{Conner's mind flashes back to the crash.}

Dwight: "JUST GO GET OUT OF HERE!"

{Sound of gunfire and guinea pigs squeaking}

Benjamin: "CONNER DON'T LOOK BACK!"

{Conner flashes back to his final moments with his Mom. She's been badly cut by a Guinea creature and is losing blood fast.}

Sarah: "It's going to be okay Conner Daddy and Benjamin will come back for us."

{Conner's face is badly scratched hence his scar. He shakes with nausea and fear.}

Conner:"M-Mom I'm S-Scared"

Sarah: {Her voice grows weaker as she loses blood} "Shh Don't be Conner I'll be right here beside you I promise."

{Conner embraces his Mother tightly}

Sarah: "Conner *coughs* I want you to promise me something."

Conner: *sniff* "What?"

Sarah: "I want you to promise me no matter what happens you'll be brave for me."

Conner:"I promise."

Sarah: "Mommy loves her little marine so much"

{Her eyes close.}

Conner:"Mom Mom MOM!!!!!"

{He nudges her but she doesn't move.}

{Conner flashes back to the next morning when stumbled upon the wreck of the family car and worse to Benjamin's body}

Conner: "BEN!!!! {He tries to wake him.} Come on Ben get up please you gotta get up. {He begins sobbing into Benjamin's body. when out of nowhere the other Benjamin materializes more specifically is created in Conner's mind as a separate personality brought on by's Conner's extreme emotional stress.}

Benjamin: "Conner!"

Conner: "Ben?"

{We see what really happens Conner sees Benjamin in front of him but in actuality he is talking to no one.}

Benjamin/Conner :"Where's Mom? S-She's she's she's...{Conner breaks down crying} I'm sorry we tried to buy you some time. Where's Dad? He's gone bro."

{Conner sobs on the ground.}

Benjamin/Conner: "Listen to me Conner it isn't safe here we have to go. go where? I don't know."

{Conner gathers the weapons off the car and grabs Benjamin's dog tags.}

Benjamin/Conner: "Hey Ben? Yes Bro? I'm glad your still with me. Me too Little Bro"

{The flashback continues showing all the scenes with Benjamin up until this point. We see all of Benjamin's actions were in fact Conner's own. the bus jacking, the chase, being fired on by the helicopters, being pursued by the police and the National Guard, Escaping from the cave, and Conner's solo rampage through South Park.}

Conner: "Your..."

Benjamin: "Dead? *laughs* "Conner what have Dad and I always told you Marines don't die *Conner joins in.* They get reassigned to guard the gates of heaven.

Conner: "I've missed you so much"

*Conner trembles in his brothers arms*

Benjamin: "I've missed you too Conner."

Stan: "Kenny I've been meaning to ask how did you bring Benjamin here if he's been dead for a year?"

Kyle: "Yeah tell us."

?: ("You guys wouldn't believe me if i told you in fact no one's gonna remember this tomorrow anyway.)

Karen: "Angel is Benjamin that boy's Guardian Angel?"

?: ("Something like that Karen")

Benjamin: "Listen to me Conner I want you move on with your life forget the past."

Conner: *chokes out sobs* "I can't I never got to say goodbye"

Benjamin:"Then say it now."

Conner:"G-Good B-Bye Benjamin."

{Two more auras appear and in their place are a man and a woman both dressed in uniforms}

Conner: "M-Mom D-Dad!"

{Conner rushes and embraces them}

Dwight: "Hello Conner."

Sarah: "We've missed you so much"

{Sarah kisses him on the forehead.}

Dwight: "My you've become so strong since we last saw you."

Conner: "Mom Dad I'm so glad your back don't ever leave again"

Sarah: "We wish we could Conner but we can't."

Conner: "W-What do you mean?"

Dwight: "Conner If it was up to us we would stay with but it's not."

Conner: *heart sinks* "Please don't go I never got to say goodbye."

Dwight: "Son saying goodbye doesn't mean anything I don't want you to think about what happened I want you remember the good times we had together."

Sarah: "We want to know that we're proud of you and we'll always love you no matter what happens."

Benjamin: "And even If we're not here it doesn't mean we're gone. We'll always be with you Conner"

{Conner looks at his dog tags and runs the plates through.}

{Benjamin Dwight and Sarah start to fade away.}

Benjamin: " Conner I promise we'll meet again someday until then *salutes* Semper Fi.

Conner: *returns the salute* "Semper Fi Benjamin."

{Conner's parents fade away with Benjamin clicking his heels before following. He looks around the room and then at himself seeing the shattered lights and bullet ridden bookcases and finally over to Mr Mackey who's still bleeding on the floor.}

Mackey: "Why haven't you called for help M'kay?

{We cut to the outside of the school where the police and Sgt Halfcock are escorting Conner into custody.}

{Conner looks out at the crowd of people watching amid a sea of police cars and swat vans, then down at Sgt Halfcock who smiles at him with encouragement.}

{Conner smiles back and slowly walks down the steps to the police vehicle, as he steps down he hears a voice call out to him.}

?: "Conner!"

{Conner turns to see the boys and their parents looking at him, Mysterion Salutes him followed by Stan Kyle, Butters, Karen, Kevin and...

Cartman: "Hey Soldier boy you looking for good time onry Fi dorra Me so Horny me love long time.

{"God Damn it Cartman!"}

{Conner returns the salute and soon the other children who showed up at the scene, Craig Token Clyde Tweek Wendy Bebe and the rest of the kids return the salute as Conner walks by. The parents and school faculty join in and eventually even the Truant Officers the police and the National Guard."}

{Before he steps in Conner looks over at the ambulance where Mr Mackey is being loaded in. He doesn't salute Conner he just smiles at him.}

{Conner steps into the van and looks up to the sky toward a shining star and smiles as It's a Long Road by DVDA plays in the background.}

{Note I know that Dan Hill sings that song but this is a cover by DVDA}

{We pan out of the school as the police cars drive off and the credits roll.}

Written by Ask Conner Kurtz and RockHead 1989

Based on First Blood directed by Andrew Vajna based on the novel by David Morell And South Park Created by Trey Parker and Matt Stone.

{All Rights belong to their respective creators.}

{My Only Intellectual Properties are Conner Kurtz, Benjamin Kurtz Gunnery Sergeant Barry Halfcock Dwight Kurtz Sarah Kurtz and Truant Officer Galt may his shattered testicles heal.}


{Stay tuned I have one more scene to show you.}
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